(06) Unexpected, Misc. - Heather and Alex Exerpt/Vignette [NSFW] {Bondage, Yuri}

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Thoughts on whips?

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  1. Punkae Artist, Writer, and Professional Tea Addict ♥ . Author [Varied-Genre] aesthetic

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    Alex's mind was a chaotic swirl of excitement and apprehension. So long she'd fantasized about this exact situation, but never had she been able to muster up the cajones to carry through with it. Going to a club in of itself was so unlike her! Meeting... a woman... well, though she often desired to, she never thought she'd get over the embarrassment, the fear of being judged. But Heather... the look in her eyes told Alex without a doubt that Heather wasn't judging her over anything. It was clear she wanted this just as much as Alex did.

    The sound of a zipper being slowly pulled brought Alex's head up. She fidgeted nervously with her long coat, so very anxious to see what the reaction to her wardrobe would be.

    “Now Alex, you look tense...” Heather purred, much closer to Alex's ear than she'd anticipated. The purple-haired vixen laughed mischievously when she jumped, startled.

    “It's just that I... well, I guess I'm a little nervous,” Alex managed to stutter out.

    “Well, that just won't do. Let's see if we can relax you a little,” the phrase was uttered with a sly smirk.

    Alex shifted on the bed, her hands folded together, fingers tied in knots. Heather, in her plain grey shirt and sweats, was still the perfect picture of seduction. She settled on Alex's lap and kissed her lightly on the lips. An electric shock traveled up Alex's spine at the contact. Shivering, she hardly noticed Heather playing with the buttons of her overcoat, slowly undoing them one by one. Alex felt herself begin to panic, not sure she was ready for this... and what if Heather was offended by her outfit! She'd gone a bit... over the top. At the time, Alex had felt so sexy, so confident, but now she was just a scared little girl, too terrified of her own shadow to follow through with any sort of situational risk.

    “Oh... my...” Heather breathed as she exposed the top of the elegant corset Alex had splurged on. “Alex, this is...” she traced the lace at the top delicately, just barely brushing her fingers along the soft skin of Alex's breast, making her writhe in anticipation and blush furiously.

    “I wasn't sure if it was okay,” Alex felt her cheeks redden further.

    “It's, well. It's perfect.” The look said she wasn't joking. Heather was eyeing Alex with erotic anticipation that caused a warm, tingling sensation to spread within Alex's abdomen... and lower.

    And, without giving Alex time to stutter out a response, Heather got up and pushed her back on the bed, peeling off her coat and rolling her onto her belly. Laughing devilishly, Heather tied Alex's hands. as they lie extended before her, with a short length of rope. It was mostly for decoration, Alex assumed, but the effect was much greater than she'd expected. She felt so... exposed. Well, she was wearing quite small undergarments, but it wasn't just that kind of exposed. The reality of this intimacy hit her hard, and Alex quivered, frightened and enthralled.

    As her train of thought somewhat derailed, she was aware of the smooth brush of skin against hers, Heather straddling her from behind. Delicious tingling erupted her every nerve ending as Heather massaged her back and shoulders, whispering sweet things to Alex about helping her loosen up, how beautiful the red and black ensemble looked against her pale skin, and before long, Alex felt entirely boneless. Small sounds formed at the back of her throat that she couldn't control, and she gave herself up to the wonderful feeling.

    Too soon, Heather extricated herself. Bounding across the room with a springy step, she gathered some items.

    “I'll be back in just a moment, love. Now be good, and don't you go anywhere!” Heather grinned and shut the door behind her softly.

    Am I ready for this? Alex questioned herself. She had to laugh at Heather's sense of humor. Where exactly would she go? It's not as if she'd just up and run out.. it had to be clear to Heather she wanted this too. And it's not exactly as though I can untie my hands in a minute or two either. The thought started to make her a bit uneasy. She supposed Heather seemed the type to consider her feelings, the type to be respectful, but really, how much did she know about her? Not all that much.

    With thoughts bringing panic more and more toward the forefront of her brain, it was no surprise Alex didn't hear the footsteps back to the room, and she flinched when Heather opened the door and slid back in.

    Oh my---

    Her jaw would have fallen to the floor if there wasn't a bed in-between. Heather was drop dead gorgeous in a sexy, black lace and silk corset, with a thong and stockings to match, her spiky purple hair strewn about in the most carefree manner. She exuded sexual prowess to the point that Alex could almost feel it like a hot breeze on her face... oh, maybe that was more blush. And the nonchalant way she held that whip---

    Wait, a whip?

    Oh geez.. Alex squirmed and made some protesting sounds but couldn't seem to form words. But how could she, when all the oxygen in the room had suddenly been sucked out, and the ceiling was closing in...

    It all came to a halt when Heather stopped in front of her and tapped the whip against her open palm.

    “Ready for playtime?” she asked with a sly smile.

    All the fear and apprehension disappeared. All that was left was a serious longing for whatever it was Heather had and was willing to give her. Still unable to form a proper sentence, Alex simply nodded. Vigorously.

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  2. Punkae Artist, Writer, and Professional Tea Addict ♥ . Author [Varied-Genre] aesthetic

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    Author's Notes:

    I really loved working on this one. It's part of a long, ongoing series that has been in concept/development for ages, and I'd love to get it off the ground and work with it a bit more. I am a huge fan of contrasting characters and bondage themes. It may also have become apparent by now that I'm a huge fan of women as well... :XD:

    Anyway, I'm happy to say that I've been working on some more art for this story line. It's still being tinkered with, and I hope to make at least a few paintings to go along with some short stories and such.

    I had a good time uploading this and doing a little grammar and word choice touch up. I hope you all like! :meowlove:

    If you want to check out the gallery view of the art for the characters from this~
    Sultry Heather Pinup [​IMG] [​IMG] Can I get you something?
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  6. ShapeFlesh Active Member Writer [NSFW]

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    I am still bad at bid vs small letters after dialogue. Also I will probably have to streamline my ellipsis to make them look better even at the cost of grammar.

    As for the story, it is not as porny as my work but I guess that is cause it focuses a bit more on other themes than straight up smut. It is nice to see something with Heather as I have only ever seen some art of her before.
  7. LjZynishter Member

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    not into whips, but i've grown to be a big fan of doling out the spankings, over the years...
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    There's probably still a bit of clean up I could do on this, but I'm decently happy with how it turned out so far. If you have questions about dialogue, let me know. You should only rarely have to sacrifice good grammar for the sake of ellipses as well, especially considering that you can achieve the same pause effect without the ellipsis at all. There are multiple ways to go about it. :XD:

    And yeah, I think it's pretty well established by now that I don't usually go for hard smut. Even when my writing contains the nitty gritty details of sex, it tends to be wrapped in a softer package. x'3



    I don't think Heather would hit her very hard. x'3

    It's more about the power potential she has than what she will literally exert on Alex. I'm generally not much of a fan of things that leave very blatant marks or have the potential to do long term damage. I'm usually into the softer bondage. c:
  9. LjZynishter Member

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    despite the common practice, i divide BDSM into at least one extra catergory...BONDAGE, BONDAGE AND DISCIPLINE, DOMINANCE AND SUBMISSION, SADOMASOCHISM...i pretty much fall into the BONDAGE category...i like restraints for friendly purposes, and roleplay, as opposed to overt powerplay...dom/sub relationships are hard for me to grasp, and master/slave totally outside my comfort zone...so whips are not something i appreciate...
  10. Punkae Artist, Writer, and Professional Tea Addict ♥ . Author [Varied-Genre] aesthetic

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    Whips can be used in friendly play though! :XD:
  11. LjZynishter Member

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    i'm sure; they're just not to my persona taste...
  12. The Bodyguard Active Member Humorist

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    It depends on what whips you use. Whip is a generic term that encompases so many different types. My preference is a flogger, seven strands about twenty inches long, then deerskin. This makes for an enjoyable evening as it does not wear out the arm of the artist, does not cut into the skin of the
    canvas, at least it shouldn't, allowing for a time to rest before starting all over again. But for writing there I prefer the bull whip that wraps around the body at least twice, the tip never arriving at the same spot twice, and with a good yank spinning the canvas back around . It is meant to hurt and does that rather well, no need for any other types as far as I'm concerned. Yes, a whip can be used in friendly play. Seeing a particular part of a body bounce whether it is firm or not is erotic. Just as holding the loved one afterwards and feeling their heart racing, hearing their sighs and moans, espcially that one comment that makes it all worthwhile: oooh, do that again. With pleasure.
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    I personally had the flogger in mind, though I kind of left if ambiguous because of the various handmade variants out there. Maybe I should have been more descript? What do you think? :meow:

    I definitely agree with the erotic nature of it all. Like most forms of control or punishment, there's a certain tenseness in the atmosphere when using it, and the way it affects the body when used... Mwah! :kiss: :lips: :lipstick: